One of the characters in The List
is Jennifer. She was put on the list as the ugliest. She has been the ugliest
all four years of high school for being overweight. Before high school started
she only had one true friend and that true friend was Margo. Margo was elected
as the prettiest girl in senior class as Jennifer was voted ugliest. Margo
stopped hanging out with Jennifer because she was too needy for her liking and
didn't fit in with any of her friends. Jennifer was left all alone with no one
to hang out with. She was voted the ugliest freshman year and she had a major
break down. For example the book states, "Jennifer had sunk to the floor in front of her locker and bawled unabashedly until her entire face was shellacked with the mixture of tears, snot, and sweat. The list, damp and twisted in her fists, was reduced to soggy pulp. Blood vessels burst in her cheeks and in the whites of her eyes. She'd barely survived the worst summer of her life, and now this? The freshman collectively backed up and gawked in horror, the way one might upon seeing a dead body. Except Jeniifer was very much alive. A gasp for breath turned into a choke, and then she vommited on herself." Throughout the years she starts to get over it. The student body
was surprised when she started cheering and jumping up and down when she was
nominated for the fourth year in a row. Something has changed with Margo's best
friends this time though. Them being the popular girls in school, they talk to
Jennifer and invite her to hang out with them. Jennifer obviously accepts
quickly so they don't change their minds. Margo is frustrated that her friends
invited her to go to homecoming so she makes an excuse to cancel it. Little did
she know Jennifer told them she could drive and Margo was left in the dust.
Jennifer has changed because now she is willing to make friends with any one
and she's not afraid to talk to Margo anymore. Jennifer advances the plot
because now Margo will try to get her friends back without Jennifer being a
part of her group. If she fails then Margo won't have friends since she's being
a bully.
http://www.obesityaction.org/educational-resources/resource-articles-2/childhood-obesity-resource-articles/bullying-bullycide-and-childhood-obesity
This article relates to Jennifer's teasing because of weight. It most commonly occurs during high school for girls and that's exactly what has happened to her. In middle school she was also rejected by Margo because she was overweight and uncool. Many people have the same story as Jennifer does.
What events or character relaizations cuased Jennifer to all of a sudden be open to friendship and not be embarrased at the fact of being ugliest? I think relates to Chris Rock, because Chris Rock was bullied for his race in the many white neighborhoods he grew up in. However, like Jennifer, Chris didn't let that stop him and now he has tons of friends like jennifer and is one the most weell-known comedians of all time. I think it would furthen the conversation if you elaborated more on the changes Jennifer went through to make her relaization about being more open and less embarrassed to allow readers to better relate the situation to other texts, the world, or thier own lives.
ReplyDeleteI liked how at the end you told the reader a little bit of what happened and how there was a good moral to your book. I also liked the quote you added. Your quote showed that the author puts in a lot of detail and imagery. One thing I would add would be to describe how Margo felt after Jennifer started hanging out with the other people. Describe how Margo reacted when Jennifer changed her personality.
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